I like it. I like the fact that Eco is watching the sky turn black instead of the sunrise/set, or something similar. I wish we could see the picture. Good luck!
Oooh, I like the juxtaposition of "happy parrot" and the sky turning black. Great start!
I also like this first line... a lot. It paints a great picture that illustrators can have a lot of fun with. Thanks for sharing ;)
I really like this! It's a great visual read.
Thanks everyone! It's so nice to get great reviews!
I like it too...would like to see what happens to Eco next. :-)