Saturday, October 27, 2012

BD One Last Chance Logline #37

Title: Price of Refuge
Genre: Psychological Suspense

When a pregnant mother of two believes she is being stalked by a ghost from her past, she needs to prove to everyone – including herself – that the danger isn’t all in her head, or risk losing her mind and maybe her life.


  1. Only change is "Or risk losing her mind, her children and her life." Other than that it reads strong.

    Good luck!

  2. I would only suggest to add the MC's name. Other than that, sounds like you got it. Good luck!

  3. I feel that since you mention she's pregnant, you should have part of the risk be her pregnancy or the baby.

  4. I agree with the first commenter. Great job!

  5. Like it! High stakes! Really good title too.