Saturday, October 27, 2012

BD One Last Chance Logline #37

Title: Price of Refuge
Genre: Psychological Suspense

When a pregnant mother of two believes she is being stalked by a ghost from her past, she needs to prove to everyone – including herself – that the danger isn’t all in her head, or risk losing her mind and maybe her life.

5 comments:

  1. Only change is "Or risk losing her mind, her children and her life." Other than that it reads strong.

    Good luck!

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  2. I would only suggest to add the MC's name. Other than that, sounds like you got it. Good luck!

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  3. I feel that since you mention she's pregnant, you should have part of the risk be her pregnancy or the baby.

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  4. I agree with the first commenter. Great job!

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  5. Like it! High stakes! Really good title too.

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