A downtrodden office assistant, struggling to change careers, unwittingly unleashes an ancient and deadly obsession, which she inspired in a past life.
Funny, but I actually don't think you gave me enough with this log line, and usually people have the opposite problem. First of all, call your character by her name. Second, maybe add a few more details about what this object tries to do in the story and what the MC must do to stop it.
I agree with Authoress and the others. I'm also not clear about what you mean by "ancient and deadly obsession" - do you mean an ancient and deadly creature who is obsessed with something? I think you could clear this up with a few more specifics. Good luck.
Funny, but I actually don't think you gave me enough with this log line, and usually people have the opposite problem. First of all, call your character by her name. Second, maybe add a few more details about what this object tries to do in the story and what the MC must do to stop it.
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I agree with Authoress - she's right on the money.
ReplyDeletePerhaps explaining how the MC unleashed the ancient and deadly obsession would add specificity to your logline.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Authoress and the others. I'm also not clear about what you mean by "ancient and deadly obsession" - do you mean an ancient and deadly creature who is obsessed with something? I think you could clear this up with a few more specifics. Good luck.
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