tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post3522342722834182622..comments2023-04-23T16:33:39.062-04:00Comments on K.T. Crowley: BD One Last Chance Logline #12K.T. Crowleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08211266985396588133noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-79994577943509492032012-10-27T16:14:49.911-04:002012-10-27T16:14:49.911-04:00This premise is really interesting and you have hi...This premise is really interesting and you have high stakes, but I'm not sure I'm really following. What first threw me was the use of "miracle" in the opening line. I'm guessing that if you are the recipient of someone else's death, you aren't going to consider that a "miracle." And how is Talyn relying on the honor of a convicted murderer? What is the situation here? I wonder if adding a little detail would help fill this out. RedCard10noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-9478092091441540322012-10-27T12:24:41.299-04:002012-10-27T12:24:41.299-04:00Neither do I. This story kicks serious butt. Good ...Neither do I. This story kicks serious butt. Good luck!Authoress Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14384597436791803105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-59380905570250766072012-10-27T09:34:36.843-04:002012-10-27T09:34:36.843-04:00I think this one works! Don't have any suggest...I think this one works! Don't have any suggestions. :)sgfnoreply@blogger.com