tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post572352293837288180..comments2023-04-23T16:33:39.062-04:00Comments on K.T. Crowley: BD One Last Chance Logline #6K.T. Crowleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08211266985396588133noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-47919923994242700822012-10-28T14:42:24.224-04:002012-10-28T14:42:24.224-04:00I agree with Authoress and the others. I'm al...I agree with Authoress and the others. I'm also not clear about what you mean by "ancient and deadly obsession" - do you mean an ancient and deadly creature who is obsessed with something? I think you could clear this up with a few more specifics. Good luck.K Callardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15689825742559394896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-86714302702029503022012-10-27T14:42:19.541-04:002012-10-27T14:42:19.541-04:00Perhaps explaining how the MC unleashed the ancien...Perhaps explaining how the MC unleashed the ancient and deadly obsession would add specificity to your logline.Blue Mermaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00156361888182945992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-23464901649413864892012-10-27T12:58:39.180-04:002012-10-27T12:58:39.180-04:00I agree with Authoress - she's right on the mo...I agree with Authoress - she's right on the money.Lucianne Poolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10687732495236270127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-14945978649464422102012-10-27T12:21:14.832-04:002012-10-27T12:21:14.832-04:00Funny, but I actually don't think you gave me ...Funny, but I actually don't think you gave me enough with this log line, and usually people have the opposite problem. First of all, call your character by her name. Second, maybe add a few more details about what this object tries to do in the story and what the MC must do to stop it.<br /><br />Good luck!Authoress Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14384597436791803105noreply@blogger.com