tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post5804067923441047279..comments2023-04-23T16:33:39.062-04:00Comments on K.T. Crowley: BD One Last Chance Logline #13K.T. Crowleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08211266985396588133noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-84361803344388298062012-10-29T09:59:52.006-04:002012-10-29T09:59:52.006-04:00Just curious where the 50-word limit is coming fro...Just curious where the 50-word limit is coming from? I see 75 words on the MSFV blog.Jill Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173785684131445232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-39471617744366008062012-10-28T15:55:19.867-04:002012-10-28T15:55:19.867-04:00This story sounds so great. I too think Authoress&...This story sounds so great. I too think Authoress' version is such a catchy logline. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06445748005510936697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-6587154695525245632012-10-28T14:32:16.437-04:002012-10-28T14:32:16.437-04:00Definitely go with Authoress's version. Howev...Definitely go with Authoress's version. However, I think what you have about would be great for your query letters. Good luck!K Callardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15689825742559394896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-60294403995699916562012-10-28T03:09:04.978-04:002012-10-28T03:09:04.978-04:00Love the longer blurb, and also love Authoress'...Love the longer blurb, and also love Authoress's version as the logline. What a fantastic story!Juliahttp://www.juliathewritergirl.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-59943882098283827322012-10-27T15:23:07.636-04:002012-10-27T15:23:07.636-04:00I vote for Version Authoress! I vote for Version Authoress! DJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14359760998871484565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-76519484368309637172012-10-27T13:59:37.022-04:002012-10-27T13:59:37.022-04:00Why did I think we had 100 words for this? Note to...Why did I think we had 100 words for this? Note to self, learn to follow directions before Bakers' Dozen starts. #Duh. <br /><br />Authoress, I'm keeping you. You did exactly what I've failed to accomplish myself for the last month. Thank you thank you!Dannie Morinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13615179669635228979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-48173009115163531422012-10-27T12:38:26.633-04:002012-10-27T12:38:26.633-04:00I think I prefer Authoress' version, aferall s...I think I prefer Authoress' version, aferall she should know what works ;)Lucianne Poolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10687732495236270127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-88030516757546311622012-10-27T12:35:52.773-04:002012-10-27T12:35:52.773-04:00This could be your logline, but you may have to tw...This could be your logline, but you may have to tweak it:<br /><br />"Sixteen-year-old Skylar Benson lives with cystic fibrosis and a singular truth: She's supposed to die first [before her father? Need to add something here]. But after witnessing her rockstar father's murder, she must do the one thing she never expected--survive."<br /><br />Good luck!<br /><br />Lucianne Poolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10687732495236270127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-46144622137806754312012-10-27T12:27:14.582-04:002012-10-27T12:27:14.582-04:00"Skylar, a sixteen year old with cystic fibro..."Skylar, a sixteen year old with cystic fibrosis, has always known that she will die first, but when she witnesses the murder of her rock star father, she must do the one thing she never expected--survive."<br /><br />I think just that is enough to get peoples attention in the log line. Like this concept. Good luck!Authoress Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14384597436791803105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-19012131224884123472012-10-27T09:51:50.705-04:002012-10-27T09:51:50.705-04:00Though I like this. This isn't a logline. This...Though I like this. This isn't a logline. This would be the copy on the back of the book. A logline is under 50 words. Best of luck.<br /><br />Violet - entry 29Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com