tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post7474141618062384054..comments2023-04-23T16:33:39.062-04:00Comments on K.T. Crowley: Logline #18K.T. Crowleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08211266985396588133noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-59280392778092715942011-10-18T14:00:28.906-04:002011-10-18T14:00:28.906-04:00I want to read more!
With that said, ditto on Hea...I want to read more!<br /><br />With that said, ditto on Heather and Janice's comments. I think a combination of the two would be perfect.<br /><br />Hope this helps! Good luck! :)K.T. Crowleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08211266985396588133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-82126756882414639112011-10-18T11:40:54.759-04:002011-10-18T11:40:54.759-04:00This version is a little confusing. I didn't s...This version is a little confusing. I didn't see the original. I like Janice's simple form. <br /><br />I wouldn't bother with the missing school. It sounds like such small potatoes next to the new stakes.Heather Hawkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16098673743504191567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-4710654887548433292011-10-18T06:43:04.782-04:002011-10-18T06:43:04.782-04:00Yeah I got some great feedback last time and I wor...Yeah I got some great feedback last time and I worried that this isn't really an improvement. I'd live to know what the majority think!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-29978641163374699052011-10-17T23:18:13.328-04:002011-10-17T23:18:13.328-04:00I have to say I liked your original better. O-o
I ...I have to say I liked your original better. O-o<br />I think if you combine them you'll have gold.<br /><br />When an ancient ritual hauls Diamond out of her history books and into a hidden magical civilization in the 16th century, she meets her ancestors and the immortal witch who threatens them. She must (fill in the blank) before her entire bloodline is destroyed and she erased from history.<br /><br />Good luck!Janice Sperryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00178805752960449557noreply@blogger.com