tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post8581563513619716636..comments2023-04-23T16:33:39.062-04:00Comments on K.T. Crowley: Logline #11K.T. Crowleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08211266985396588133noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-28827422061923519112011-10-18T13:01:20.432-04:002011-10-18T13:01:20.432-04:00I agree - you don't need "contemporary Lo...I agree - you don't need "contemporary London" in the logline. Sounds like a great read. Good luck!Robbinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13340267650156858452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-4877082525484721822011-10-18T12:11:57.116-04:002011-10-18T12:11:57.116-04:00thanks for the feedback so far: on Absolutewrite
p...thanks for the feedback so far: on Absolutewrite<br />people kept asking me when the story took place (you never know with fantasy, it could be an historic one/steampunk etc), so I decided to keep it. Changed it into modern-day LOndon, though. Can't wait for the winners of the Baker's Dozen to be announced! let's cross our fingers ...louisakleinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16541235959602674561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-1035133241043103712011-10-18T11:56:14.459-04:002011-10-18T11:56:14.459-04:00I like your revisions. I think it's safe to r...I like your revisions. I think it's safe to remove London because you mention she's a paranormal consultant and you talk about the planet Earth.Janice Sperryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00178805752960449557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1940209088259004106.post-63312283773728471822011-10-17T22:54:35.859-04:002011-10-17T22:54:35.859-04:00I like this!
My only comment would be to consider...I like this!<br /><br />My only comment would be to consider removing "In contemporary London". Unless it's an important factor of the story that must be known in the logline, I don't think the place is needed. <br /><br />Hope this helps! Good luck. :)K.T. Crowleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08211266985396588133noreply@blogger.com